Feedback For First Half

We had great presence, appearing confident and well-rehearsed. The timing/pacing was great, and overall it was an excellent presentation. Donald said that the film was so engaging that he stopped listening, but that wasn’t really a negative.

It was one of the stronger presentations of the day from the group that our lecturers got to see, graded as a ‘high’ if they could grade us.

To improve, a punchline revealing the juxtaposition between the penguins and the people on Lambton Quay could have really nailed in the metaphor - showing how the penguins were actually an analogy for our target audience.

Our challenge for the next half is: How do we make sure that we don’t become too complacent? Mix it up a little bit, rock the idea boat, make our concepts resilient. Make sure that the second part of the brief is even better than the first part!