We showed both Donald and Tristam (separately) our presentation and dossier, and recieved these critiques and helpful ideas:
Presentation
- Have a screen at start of video with project title
- Could try one word of text on videos at key points?
- Letterbox top and bottom with black bars to get rid of BBC logo
- Include end credits with video references, paper, names etc
- Include street noises? Maybe a crossfade from penguin noises?
- Fake laugh track? Funny music?
- Use either captioning/subtitles or record the script over video for marking/moderation (so have two different versions of the video; one for presentation and one for marking)
- Too many Evelyns in the introductory clip of Evelyn
Dossier
- Up the font size of the body copy by a point or even just 1/2 a point
- Definitely agree with getting rid of screenshots that are pixellated
- In the illustration list identify which images in the booklet were screenshots (e.g. page 4-10 images were screenshots from the referenced videos)
- Make the pulled out bits of research more obvious
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