Tuesday, 23 August 2016

Feedback For First Half

We had great presence, appearing confident and well-rehearsed. The timing/pacing was great, and overall it was an excellent presentation. Donald said that the film was so engaging that he stopped listening, but that wasn’t really a negative.

It was one of the stronger presentations of the day from the group that our lecturers got to see, graded as a ‘high’ if they could grade us.

To improve, a punchline revealing the juxtaposition between the penguins and the people on Lambton Quay could have really nailed in the metaphor - showing how the penguins were actually an analogy for our target audience.

Our challenge for the next half is: How do we make sure that we don’t become too complacent? Mix it up a little bit, rock the idea boat, make our concepts resilient. Make sure that the second part of the brief is even better than the first part!

W6S1 Class

We presented all three of our ideas to our feedback group and this was the one the majority liked best. They liked it because of the quick, spontaneous interaction, the fact that it could effect a small group or a large group of people, and that people didn't have to do anything beforehand to be involved in it.

'Pimp My Idea'

We had to pass our best idea round the circle of people in our feedback group for them to ideate ways we could improve our concept.




Fleshing out our concept more using the best ideas we received from the 'Pimp My Idea' task

Journey Map

Sunday, 21 August 2016

More Ideation


  1. Whoopee cushions hidden in pavers
  2. A pad at the traffic lights that makes the green man come quicker the more force is applied to the pad (jumping up and down on it). This links back to people pressing the button lots of times because they think it will make the lights change faster.
  3. Waist height huge screens on shop fronts that place passersby in different scenes (e.g. jungle scene and everyone that walks past has a jungle hat on)
  4. App that scans people's fingerprints (encouraging interactions) and gives you rewards when you reach milestones.
  5. A character projected on store fronts that follows people around.
  6. Bright, colourful tiles randomly scattered throughout the plain pavement and when you step on them they burst out with native bird song (bringing nature into the city). Also, when you stand on the paver the correlating bird is projected onto the nearby store fronts + there is signage informing you about the species.
  7. If an app, if would have to use the locations settings on your phone and you can only open it and use it when you are in the CBD of a city.
  8. Hi-five cam (like an American Kiss Cam) where two people at the traffic lights were projected onto a large screen and prompted to hi-five.
  9. Pavement that suddenly and randomly turns into water, ground collapsing etc that scares people. It could also say "Quick, jump!", turning it into a game.
  10. Pavement that makes pain sounds when you walk on it OR sighing traffic light buttons.
  11. Instead of the button at traffic lights there could be two palm reading sensors so that two different people had to put their hands on it to activate the lights.
  12. Traffic lights that show you an animal and ask you to make the noise of the animal in order to activate them.


Engagement Research

What We Do In the Shadows
http://reward.net.nz/What-We-Do-In-the-Shadows

To help promote of Taika Waititi and Jemaine Clements vampire mockumentary, What We Do in the Shadows, the designers created an ambient installation around Wellington during the second week of release to help keep people talking and thinking about the film after it's successful initial launch.

In the film the vampires enjoy a bit of dancing, so with the help of the clever chaps at Assembly Ltd they made a bespoke software interface that turned your shadow into a vampire, projected 20 metres tall on the side of highly visible Wellington buildings like Te Papa and Reading cinemas.

The interaction for the user was super simple and immediately rewarding. Everyone who experienced it left smiling and often came back for more.

Here's a summary video of the work

Thursday, 18 August 2016

Brief

We have decided to stay in our group and stick with our brief. We did like the sound of a few other briefs but when we went to have a second, more detailed look at them they weren't up on Stream.

Monday, 15 August 2016

Links To Our Reflective Diaries

http://georgiareflectivediary.blogspot.co.nz
http://farrenreflection.blogspot.co.nz/
http://hannahreflective.blogspot.co.nz/

Final Videos



Final Dossier










Final Edits - Video For Presentation

Today we met up and edited our video for presentation based on the critique we received on Friday. We found a new clip for the introductory shot of Evelyn, we used black bars (letter boxing) to hide the BBC logos, we made a title screen and end credits, and we added a soundtrack of city noises to improve our metaphor and better combine the visuals with our narration. We then recorded ourselves performing our presentation script and made a copy of our video that had this over the top for our lectures to review for marking, as they are not going to record our presentation on Tuesday. 

Today we also printed the cover of our dossier at Ink Digital and the inside pages of the dossier at uni. We then used a binding technique that Donald had shown us an exemplar of in class on Friday to bind our pages together. This involved using double sided tape to stick the inside edge of the pages together and then covering the spine with black tape.

Sunday, 14 August 2016

Final Edits - Dossier

Today we met up and did the final edits on our dossier to get it ready for printing tomorrow.





Friday, 12 August 2016

W4S2 Critique

We showed both Donald and Tristam (separately) our presentation and dossier, and recieved these critiques and helpful ideas:

Presentation

  • Have a screen at start of video with project title
  • Could try one word of text on videos at key points?
  • Letterbox top and bottom with black bars to get rid of BBC logo
  • Include end credits with video references, paper, names etc
  • Include street noises? Maybe a crossfade from penguin noises?
  • Fake laugh track? Funny music?
  • Use either captioning/subtitles or record the script over video for marking/moderation (so have two different versions of the video; one for presentation and one for marking)
  • Too many Evelyns in the introductory clip of Evelyn


Dossier

  • Up the font size of the body copy by a point or even just 1/2 a point
  • Definitely agree with getting rid of screenshots that are pixellated
  • In the illustration list identify which images in the booklet were screenshots (e.g. page 4-10 images were screenshots from the referenced videos)
  • Make the pulled out bits of research more obvious

Final Presentation Script

Farren thought that we should make our presentation a wee bit less formal and move away from entirely quoting parts of our dossier, so we altered our script a little.

The Final Script:

As urban population grows, so does the need for higher quality city spaces that offer relief from the harshness that density can bring. There is no better place to start than with city streets, arguably the most frequented shared space in the urban environment.

Studies show that pressures in the workplace mean that office and business workers are highly likely to have excessive amounts of stress.

What can we do to help alleviate the stresses of negotiating crowded sidewalks in the central business districts of cities?

This is Wiremu, a 25 year old intern at a law firm.
He is introverted, yet aspires to move up the ranks at work.

This is Craig, a 37 year old office worker at an insurance company.
He is family orientated and a creature of habit.

This is Evelyn, a 45 year old CEO for an accounting firm.
She is high-achieving and likes routine and being organised

Wiremu is walking to work. He finds the crowds stressful and he can’t clear his mind for the day ahead.
If he had positive interactions with other people on the street it might make him feel less worried about the crowd and give him a more enthusiastic mindset.
We need a way to encourage people like Wiremu to interact with others to take their minds off work and stress.

Craig is on his way to his usual cafe. He has been having a busy day and gets frustrated wasting his time waiting at the traffic lights.
Interestingly he thinks his break, and therefore his chance to unwind, is the destination, not the walk to it.
We need to provide opportunities for fun that make getting from A to B on city streets entertaining and exciting instead of irritating for people like Craig.

Look at Evelyn dashing to her lunch meeting. She clearly needs an intervention to elevate her mood and take her mind off the stress.
But surprisingly when she encounters something fun she doesn’t want to engage with it as it is outside of her routine.
We need a way to make the benefits of engaging in something humorous, outweigh the stigma that fun is unprofessional to make the city streets more refreshing for people like Evelyn.

How might we facilitate humour on city streets to encourage unexpected and fun moments of connection that reduce stress?

De-stress me
Connect me
Challenge me
Entertain me
Immerse me
Unwind me

Improve my well-being

Dossier Test Print