We practiced our presentation draft to a few of our peers and then entered the 'Shark Tank' to get feedback from Tristam and Mark.
Their feedback:
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- Poster wall realistic?
- Dave Dobbyn or Flight of the Concords??
- Breaking it up on keynote or getting the timing perfect
- Background music, maybe at the start and the end
- Commercial could be shorter and faster for social media
- Is the text good enough production quality?
- Maybe in the event section we could mention the audience and that it’s appropriate for them
- The audience clip is too long, could you include some shots from different angles?
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